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The Bloomers

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she said my eyes are blue. truth is, i'm evergreen-
mad- blooming mad for weeds and lesser seeds- oh yes-
the ones that trample dainty, feeble flowers
to swallow up the sun, and sprawl their souls across
my garden-soil. someday, i say, they'll flourish-
my friends of ill repute. and maybe it's naive
to trust in thistled things- but not a waste,
and hope is never lost, only misplaced.
Tried something different today. I think I've started writing in iambs by default. I was thinking about hope.

Small vocab note: "green" meant innocent or inexperienced, once. We don't really use it that way much anymore.
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MrWootton's avatar
I really like that final line.